I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Kairo, I like how you gave a bit of the task , Maybe Instead of Adding the Link Do Embed and not Link because when you go use it It says Not Found I do see you found it Hard but Easy But Mainly Easy Maybe Step it up and Give it a Challenge. - Orlando -
Kia Ora Kairo, I like the way you put your DLO on there so people can see what you were doing. When you put it on there you could make it bigger and make sure it isn't bigger then the page so people can still see it. Also you could add a little bit more text at the start and the six important things to add to your post! Well what were the challenging bits in the work?
Kia ora Kai, I really like this. Maybe next time you could add what you have done cause i would really like to see what you have made and who your partner was.
Hello Kairo, I like how you gave a bit of the task , Maybe Instead of Adding the Link Do Embed and not Link because when you go use it It says Not Found I do see you found it Hard but Easy But Mainly Easy Maybe Step it up and Give it a Challenge. - Orlando -
ReplyDeleteok thanks orlando that's what i will work on that
DeleteKia Ora Kairo,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put your DLO on there so people can see what you were doing. When you put it on there you could make it bigger and make sure it isn't bigger then the page so people can still see it. Also you could add a little bit more text at the start and the six important things to add to your post!
Well what were the challenging bits in the work?
ok thanks i will work on that a lot ema-leigh.
DeleteKia ora Kai, I really like this. Maybe next time you could add what you have done cause i would really like to see what you have made and who your partner was.
ReplyDeletebella was my partner joel and i will next time add what i have done
Deletekai ore I am a fan of the creation and you are a good person at playing the
ReplyDeletegame we play'd and how fast are you.
pretty fast thanks for asking
DeleteKia ora Kia, I really like this. maybe next time you could do some more effort in to it. can you put a link to the slide.
ReplyDeletefine harlin i will next time
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